darkoceanrobin

Name: Jessica
Surname: Salmonson
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About Me: A newbie dark fantasy writer. If you want to help I can always use another critique, there are plenty of chapters that haven't had one yet. Look for the book Soul Tear on Wattpad. com Right now the books grene placement keeps glitching and Wattpads auto placement thing keeps putting it in Mystery/thriller. Am working on getting this resolved. I need help with the main Characters, Marryn and Parcival I think I have it do over the course of the book they overcome their differences and become close friends, but I wonder if they too friendly at times. If anyone would be willing to read a few chapters and give some input on this I'd appreciate it. And, no I don't want it to have romantic elements in it. :/ Meh. Oh, and when I say dark, I mean a touch or horror. xD Try too anyways. lol. If you happen to have a book on Wattpad let me know and I'll read it too.
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